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Post by *-=Prodigaul~Child=-* on Jan 18, 2006 11:16:08 GMT
Fourty caliber toten,Have a nigger hopen/ Take his mind and Open, now his brain aint copen/ Stem cells is broken,Cancerous brain iz choken/ Bars he coating,from the thoughts thats floating/ flow is river boating,now mad thoughts im noten/
ha ha ha^ lil flow with it now let me switch my style
Banging hammers like MEXICAN-WORKING/ Soft words dude ya TEXT-IS-NOT-HERTING/ Cough blood fro the HEX-THAT-IM-BLERTING/ Gunz bang when i FLEX-ITS-ALERTING/
ayo quick shit ill finish when i come home lil freestyle no time at all
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Post by Etell E. Gence on Jan 18, 2006 12:55:29 GMT
aiight nice but you could do betta
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Post by Vallus on Jan 18, 2006 15:41:14 GMT
I liked the 2nd part better....u don't need the caps though The verse should speak for itself
and it's *coping
lmao
dope shit though, flow was solid, the 1st verse was just a lil simple
stay active n up^
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Post by Dennen on Jan 18, 2006 16:36:17 GMT
nice flow
both verses were a lil too short an basic tho
an ima have to disagree wit jay an say that yo first verse was better
jus wasnt feelin those multis
6/10
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Post by Double~Hitz on Jan 18, 2006 17:27:21 GMT
Flow Was Aight
Short But I think it Was StillAight Fo A Lil Verse
Peace
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Post by *-=Prodigaul~Child=-* on Jan 18, 2006 20:25:07 GMT
and it's *coping
lmao
^you know i knew that right i did dat on purpose lol just like i said toten
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