sum more bullshit

[Etell E. Gence]

feel this shit in my heart...cant part my love...da block is hotter den da market was...cought it cus...i got dis shit ...Jay-Z blacked it out and pass da dub...i carry da torch wit pride...locked up inside...Reason ta doubt dese wack fake office lies...fucking wit me is like talking flies...on da edge and i outhta die...but feel me on dat mayne cus my brain is often my...cannon ta blast dis wack ass parking guys...hate ta love as fate would have it...im da gift n im makeing maters...worse showing dese cats dat fakeing shaters...dreams of dese denomenator factors........

[Vallus]

pretty dope flow
work on structure
it was a pretty solid piece
kinda short but I liked the references n little bit of imagery


good drop.....stay active n up

[Etell E. Gence]

thanx

[Dennen]

nice flow, but you really need to sort out that structure
it fucks up tha flow a lil when you dont know when its a new line

overal was pretty god

but was a lil short

likin tha Jay-z References tho
worked well

some nice lines

7/10(losses points on shortness an structure, add to it an tidy it up an could probly be an 8-9)