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Post by Etell E. Gence on Jan 16, 2006 22:40:35 GMT
dont fuck it up cause da keystle king is back...coughing up dese hair balls cause im eaten cats...metttaphores for days...changing my ways im offically policeing rap/ so blue all on badge shining like im Elvis...thought dis shit up for weeks but it took a day for me ta tell dis...niggas no im hot on da mic so dey mail pics/ sling da gear on time for me da get ta title home...crushing em hard yall a think i had some tires on...make em leave like techno geeks when da hype is gone/ title back in my hand...got it back in demand...slip away so fast yall a think i was sand...but once again...i opened it up a ta let da saga begin...let em have dey Glory but now it all comes to an end
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Post by Dennen on Jan 17, 2006 9:49:36 GMT
pretty nice key
good flow mettas were about average
nice drop
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Post by Vallus on Jan 17, 2006 16:17:11 GMT
solid drop....lil more complex than sum other shit i seen by you tryin indent at the end of bars so it isn't paragraph form...it'll make it easier to read....the intro was funny as hell.....
I liked the 1st 4 lines the best
decent read.......stay active n up^
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Post by Double~Hitz on Jan 17, 2006 22:33:18 GMT
dont fuck it up cause da keystle king is back...coughing up dese hair balls cause im eaten cats
Yo That Was Dope As Fuck That Line
Nice Drop
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Post by Etell E. Gence on Jan 18, 2006 0:51:45 GMT
thankx personally i thought it sucked when i 1st read it but thankx im tryna switch my stlye
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