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Post by dangerousmind on Jan 13, 2006 2:18:52 GMT
u better get a bodygurard like kevin costner/ cuz when i catch u ima break u off somethin propper/ pump ya ass up like u need oxygen/6 shots guarented ur heart stoopin/ i keep my heat like gilme kept his ax/ 1 call get ya ass ate up by my wolfpac/ man i know niggas hate me/but watch ya mouth before u wish u never meet me/buss off shots like seemin/disin me man wake up stop dreamin/ hit u wit that steal have u shakin for crack and u phenin/
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Post by dangerousmind on Jan 13, 2006 2:19:12 GMT
check that out
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Post by Dennen on Jan 13, 2006 9:00:37 GMT
a bit better than your last drop
structure is still fucked tho
but flow has improved an concepts a lil
overall was ok
keep uppin tho
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Post by Perplex on Jan 13, 2006 18:44:30 GMT
Yea better fam, fix ya structure n keep ya flow right but good job man
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Post by Vallus on Jan 14, 2006 4:30:25 GMT
it was dope but short......liked the references and vocab
pretty dope drop...next time put some more effort...lmao
stay up^
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Post by Perplex on Jan 16, 2006 1:23:10 GMT
Thats wassup uppin for my cousin
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