Drastic
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Post by Drastic on Jan 13, 2006 0:38:47 GMT
Ehh Keyed in 15 mins at the least. I could do much better!
Crazy shit..doin wayne brady skits.. Insane and schizo, kiddo, who’s line is it? You can’t make a Colin Mochrie outta me You wanna see? we’ll make your body leak And you’ll probly scream when the shotties seen Get in trouble and peril with the double barrel Muggers scare you, wearin rubber rainsuits Another lame dude gets his frame blew The usual suspects that bust necks it’s the same two CE and D…the brain crew The incredible intellectuals The Freshest specialists wreckin you With professional wrestler moves to flex on you Check the technical when we step to you Read a sentence or two that our pencils drew Can’t comprehend the news that we’re sendin you Doin what we’re meant to do, we were born for the art A sickly breed that rips emcee’s till they’re torn apart We’re more than sharp, we rap with pins And when Dras begins that’s when Empire starts.
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Post by *-=Prodigaul~Child=-* on Jan 13, 2006 0:44:43 GMT
I've seen alot better from you
but it was straight diffrent type of style it was tight
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Perplex
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Post by Perplex on Jan 13, 2006 0:44:46 GMT
nice key man n like tha last 1 nice flow
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Drastic
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Post by Drastic on Jan 13, 2006 0:50:03 GMT
Ehh Ill spend tiem on my next verse!
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Post by Dennen on Jan 13, 2006 9:03:26 GMT
shit was pretty nice
flow was hot an had some real nice lines vocab was ok
overall a nice drop
BTW you say youl spend time on your next verse like thats what you shouldve done on this one
but if you did that it wouldnt be a keystyle
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Post by Vallus on Jan 17, 2006 23:01:48 GMT
I liked the wording alot......made it hard hitting and consistant The intro was the hottest part....1st maybe 4-6 lines or so Everything else was hot but the endin was kinda abrupt Dope drop.......solid overall
stay active n up
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