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Post by Vallus on Jan 8, 2006 4:38:41 GMT
Yea...you can spit ur words on the block, Observe & then watch, wit the nerve for plots But if u aren't on corners n workin with stocks Then u a lyin nerd, ridin with herb workin wit cops I got plenty time in the burbs plus grimier spots & that time on lock, so my composure shows I pop Stay blazin the dutch to the top, the curb is a shop Fuck cheddar and bezzle, it's worth some typa effort But when I'm riding, reciting or writing I'm workin for props Got the urge from my pops, stay in the dark lurkin to jock Most my family where perturbed or surely shocked When they found out I like rap & love words on pot The life had it's up's & curves but I still got my ox They might wanna try n lock my mind inna box, But I don't like the thoughts so I remind my dogs That whenever we lightin up or strikin it defines a cause Not just going out to fight with hogs or find sum drawers The times is for us, yea, the same people don't like the law We need to keep up on the strength that we grind the raw For an afterlife and not just signs from the lord.....
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Post by Dennen on Jan 8, 2006 16:32:22 GMT
ya flow is deffinately gettin better with each spit
had some real nice lines in this good flow an vocab is showin improvement
nice shit
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Post by Catastrophe on Jan 10, 2006 5:08:55 GMT
damn hot flow here this was pretty dope..i enjoyed readin this there were a couple lines..that were pretty hot...keep the ink spillin
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Post by Double~Hitz on Jan 12, 2006 15:44:33 GMT
Like Dennen Said
Ya Getin Betta Wit Each Spit
Ehanced AY Shit Since Ya Join
Dope Flow
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