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Post by Vallus on Dec 17, 2005 0:49:08 GMT
He smokes piff wit haze, walkin down the interstate Thoughts abound of puttin rounds into a window pane or a plate Pain was his fate, stranded by hate, He feels that the planet is wrongly shaped He was just in the wrong time in the wrong place, Gone off on the wrong route to reach out to sum papes A shotgun, .45 and .38, born to die and early wake The journey comes down from outter space It's some dark clouds on the horizon surroundin his face The drift away slows his pace, Walks over the barrier, walks over the gate Goes up the embankment holdin his pay, The rain slows..... A rainbow sprouts and his pants show sum stains Sirens in the distant sound as though they have started to gain On his location, he's no longer waiting, Tools on the ground to load for blazin He chills inna ditch with a bag filled with 100 lbs of golden statements The jokes where made N he didn't know he would survive the plot Now he's the only one that wasn't shot What the fuck....who alerted the cops? What happened to the lookout perched on the block Sum1 must have been workin wit them since they began the job No tellin who it could have been, they all had they images locked This thickens the plot, he sits back thinkin & drinks a shot Pulls out another dutch, I'm goin out shootin so wut the fuck Might as well die high as hell from this blunt.....
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Post by Vallus on Dec 17, 2005 0:52:02 GMT
part 1...high as hell from the blunt.....wuuutttt....lmao
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Post by Catastrophe on Dec 17, 2005 3:48:58 GMT
dayum man this shit was raw as hell...some reall deep shit here...keep the ink spillin man...nice drop..
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Post by NINO_eMCee on Dec 17, 2005 21:27:54 GMT
it's good. there's deep like but you have much better rhymes
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Post by Dennen on Dec 18, 2005 9:16:41 GMT
wasnt feelin tha last bar but apart from that this shit was hot as hell
nice story good flow
ovarall some hot deep shit
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