Didn't know I had it in me....

[Vallus]

This goes off the name of the diss....


I didn't know I had it in me,
I was backin off from my enemies N friendlies
Then I see a faggot tryin cypher in a thread for tryin ta diss me
Go ahead and take those words you wasted,
And go use them and you're dick to give ya bro's a facelift
Homo makin, me have to come outta reitrement for closin caskets
Shit, I wasn't gonna spit more to assault the masses
But I think the peeps should know ya mom keeps an open matress
Armageddon was the lesson and even the pro's know the tactics
Like Backwudz, you're gonna have to see ya love me
Otherwise
I'll break you down to ounces like a QP out in the Country
You came in drownin from stumbling, now you surrounded
You fuckin clown you gettin rounds in this bout, no out's or running
I'm just playing with my flow but
It still looks better than that crap you spit under me
It's time to eat and I'm hungry,
When I see through ya blinds like a transluscent eye in the sky
I'll take apart ya body & leave ya spine lookin like the structure on my lines
Break out and go make a fuckin run for an exit sign....

[qpjames]

are ya steppin if not you should kik rocks
i aint got time for jay to try to play like hes hot
you frontin..a mothafukin computer is all you got
jerkin it in front a the moniter wile ya moms smokes on some pot
at home thinkin up some flows cause u is lonely
callin up ya hommie like "yo please wontcha hold me"
told you before my name is qp james see
when you say my name ill put you to shame easily
i know ya jus tryin to see what i got to bring to tha table
over here listinin to you bein fake as a fable
u hangin by tha rope so somebody cut tha cable
and watch you die.. lest you think ya willin and able
postin raps is gay thats why yous a moderater
not a denominater a cominly known chronik hater
tryin to suck guys dick u dissed only a day later
after ya thought u was sick but ill soon fix ya
wait a minute how long have i been in this
u try 2 diss me its ok i know im sicker whenever im finished
fuck this im out

[Dennen]

to Jay

that verse was ok had an ok flow but was far from your best an i know you could do better if you wanted to

as fo QP i never seen nuthin else from you so im gonna assume that this was a standard verse fo you
if so then nice flow

but you didnt really have anythin else
basic rhyme scheme no decent punches or worplay no an tha most basic vocab

you got a few things to work on but keep tryin