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Post by Vallus on Nov 30, 2005 2:22:47 GMT
Read it slow....
I'm the type to hide from on warring fronts I type to kill for sport like scorching guns Listen, this implement is important son I'm peaking on sets....you just Warming Up Take ya ass over to that other board you dumb Actually I bring the fire, never supplying no less Fatality, you leavin this battle dyin Soulless Fightin a dyke that likes typin in caps, it's no stress Bitch probly make a thread fulla sets to protest Not even aim 'em at me but act like they blown my vest You addin A's to Apocolypse like some kinda ho, notta vet Learn to press that button below this called spellcheck Or type back to reply like a fag and go hell with ya threats It's evident, that's when my merit hit's, you'll stare N shit Ain't prepared for it, that's why you box the air in fits Add my name to maybe one line then back to bare basics The steel get's paired with your face quick, Beef but you gonna say it's all in fun like we havin a gay old time You probly gonna call police back up like Dipset did the other nite Smother your writes, under the cover of a vice I gotta continue this venue with friends on the menu to slice I guess I'm a lecter when I'm stressed to the effort to stick to a fight
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Catastrophe
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Post by Catastrophe on Nov 30, 2005 2:47:27 GMT
dayum..this was fire..im likin this the ending was sick as fuck...no doubt flames right here uve elevated since we've been fuckin around fam..shit is sick as fuck..keep the ink spillin man...ohh and ill be back with a reply to this diss : )
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Post by Dennen on Dec 7, 2005 21:14:32 GMT
it was pretty nice
you jus need to add a lil wordplay or somethin
but it was pretty tight as it is
i wouldnt say it was one or best tho
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Post by Double~Hitz on Dec 8, 2005 0:18:13 GMT
dope drop like dennen said betta wordplay get some betta vocab but dope drop ovall
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