Armageddon is on.... }{ SANDYPANTZ

[Vallus]

No Artist Potential, Sharpen ya Pencil, Feudin My Way The Margin is Stenciled
Not me, I'm Ali....Die in the Fray cuz U a Super LightWeight like Sharmba Mitchell
Put ya Brains in a High Place N get Charged wit Little when I Spark a Pistol
Say you won't Reply in this Place becuz you got Spied then Marked N Sizzled
I'mma Let The Ink Spill and Part ya Riddles......

You got a New View and All You Really Wanna Do is Dream
Stick with your Finger in Your Ass before you getting Douched from the Ring
Yea...Music is Everything....But an Epical Saga is probably from Final Fantasy
Shut up with Keys...I'm the only one in Key Styles that's uppin ya piece
If you weren't busy with Balladist's and 2 Shades of Illness maybe you'd Touch a King

A Quick Diss is Dismissed as being Illiterate as a Lil Bitch
Gettin a Flamethrower after Game Ova cuz you know you ain't Lil Flip
Droppin Clips to Drop this Script and Drop a Bitch Like my recent Topic, Droppin Hitz
Breaking Sandcastles with no Damn Battle so get a Hand Back To Chistophers Dick....

I can 'Rhyme LIKE YOU', Spit Stupid Multi's 'ALL THE TIME LIKE You', But 'I'm FINE WITH VIEWS' wit-my-GRIMY MOOD so 'Grab-a-Stoop' and Watch as I Put them-dashes-too but BAD FOR DUDE that I'm 'PAST-MY-PUBES'

[Vallus]

WHOMP

[Catastrophe]

dayum man...this shit was ur best yet so far...no doubt u got me good right here im likin how u threw in them topics and what not that i wrote bout...shit was def sick..my fav part.... was

A Quick Diss is Dismissed as being Illiterate as a Lil Bitch
Gettin a Flamethrower after Game Ova cuz you know you ain't Lil Flip
Droppin Clips to Drop this Script and Drop a Bitch Like my recent Topic, Droppin Hitz <fuckin sick right there man..nice multis with a sick personal...
Breaking Sandcastles with no Damn Battle so get a Hand Back To Chistophers Dick....<crazy personal once again...


overall this was by far ur craziest drop..and now that i see u have real potential ima have to come back..lol...

[Double~Hitz]

jay said:

No Artist Potential, Sharpen ya Pencil, Feudin My Way The Margin is Stenciled
Not me, I'm Ali....Die in the Fray cuz U a Super LightWeight like Sharmba Mitchell

lol nice rhymin a differnet to what ya drop

Put ya Brains in a High Place N get Charged wit Little when I Spark a Pistol
Say you won't Reply in this Place becuz you got Spied then Marked N Sizzled
I'mma Let The Ink Spill and Part ya Riddles......

that last line was dope tha first seemed a bit forced and that tha words just rhymed thats why ya put them

You got a New View and All You Really Wanna Do is Dream
Stick with your Finger in Your Ass before you getting Douched from the Ring

nice shit dope line nice concept

Yea...Music is Everything....But an Epical Saga is probably from Final Fantasy
Shut up with Keys...I'm the only one in Key Styles that's uppin ya piece
If you weren't busy with Balladist's and 2 Shades of Illness maybe you'd Touch a King

nice lyrically and soom good concept

A Quick Diss is Dismissed as being Illiterate as a Lil Bitch
Gettin a Flamethrower after Game Ova cuz you know you ain't Lil Flip
Droppin Clips to Drop this Script and Drop a Bitch Like my recent Topic, Droppin Hitz
Breaking Sandcastles with no Damn Battle so get a Hand Back To Chistophers Dick....

fuck you that was shit nah lol nice shit flow was dope as fuck but it was a lie really cuase ya really wasnt dropin hitz lol

I can 'Rhyme LIKE YOU', Spit Stupid Multi's 'ALL THE TIME LIKE You', But 'I'm FINE WITH VIEWS' wit-my-GRIMY MOOD so 'Grab-a-Stoop' and Watch as I Put them-dashes-too but BAD FOR DUDE that I'm 'PAST-MY-PUBES'

ama be real and say this isnt you i used to jay verse where ya just chattin bout stupid stuff about sigs and shit plus ya say that ya dont need this style but in that bar tha flow was nice and good lyrics

it just show jay can come wit tha shit

ova all it was ya best drop not like you to drop some thin this complex i like nearly every line cept from tha last bar keep this shit up

8.5/10

[*-=Prodigaul~Child=-*]

aaahhhhhh yeah dun elevated a hhoooollllleeee lot i like your style now shits wwwaaayyyy better