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Post by NINO_eMCee on Oct 24, 2005 18:48:39 GMT
The skies are not always blue The sun does not always shine for you Sunshine or rain, Pleasure or pain, What’s the use of us sighin’ Dark clouds may come and may go But brighter days’ in store Always remember The skies are not always blue But I’ll stay your hommie next to you You can talk to me and keep a silent, you can swear Nomatter the circumstances always and everywhere I’ll be your listener, your advisor, your opponent This might be good at that moment You can treat me as an enemy, treat me as a friend I’ll love you desire you till the very end I won’t stop you cryin’, I ain’t lyin’, I’ll stimulate you smiling I’ll wipe your tears and take away your fears I can be a captain on your boat and slave in the road. To live is to suffer but I want still be as your son You’ll put me a job which I’ll have already done And there will be a time when I’ll shine as bright as stars Now there is mine there is yours, before only ours But I see what you’ve been tryin’ to show me, all these years To do the right thing, cause after the tears, come the cheers
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Catastrophe
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Post by Catastrophe on Oct 27, 2005 13:33:34 GMT
dayum man this was real deep....lots of emotion here...im lovin it...peeps need to stop sleepin this one and start feed..much respect to u right here on this one i really enjoyed reading it..keep the ink spillin..
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Post by Double~Hitz on Oct 27, 2005 13:34:12 GMT
yeah deep shit keep tha shit up
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Post by Vallus on Oct 27, 2005 13:59:46 GMT
This is one of the best pieces I've seen from you yet...
Very solid flow and pretty good imagery.... Some nice vocabulary you had going on too....
Stay Active and Stay Up^
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Post by NINO_eMCee on Oct 27, 2005 19:47:01 GMT
dayum man this was real deep....lots of emotion here...im lovin it...peeps need to stop sleepin this one and start feed..much respect to u right here on this one i really enjoyed reading it..keep the ink spillin.. thanx man. i like your words man. i'ma goin' like this mayne. thanx one more time. THANX to EVERYONE who apreciate my work.
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